I am also debating on a few things in regard to my story, one of them is retconning the previous "Summer Tournament" back a year from the events of this story. Seems kind of odd for the game to have another tournament right after with no room for characters to grow.
Also, when I'm done with the Vampire/JarPig Squad arc, I want move into some slice of life stuff afterwards that takes place around the Fall (Thanksgiving Break) to Semester Finals before going into the third act (Featuing Bass/Charleston Squad) which is going to have a more lively and entertaining mood compared to the previous arc.
I wonder if I should include some of my Koikatsu renders within the story (Similiar to what I did in my Summer with Chovy fanfiction). It would be renders showing specific scenes in the story.
No worries, I have been out of it for a while too. Actually, there's a lot I have to fix with my story especially with Part 1.
I generally have an idea on how to end Part 2 and Start off Part 3 but it's the little things that sometimes holds me back when writing. I'm trying to achieve different moods for each part but trying to keep the story consistant too.
Posted a rough draft EPUB file for Part 1 of Mil-Sim Story. I'm going to put it in my kindle and see how it looks.
Checking it out now and Yeeep It's a mess but the main text seems alright. Can't really adjust the font with KO reader. Just more stuff to figure out over time.