I love haikus! I really like how you interpreted the prompt, it's a very unique concept and you put it very well - I can almost hear a clock ticking faintly in the distance. really like it!
this is great, thank you so much for sharing. i like how it has a twist despite being so concise. it's powerful. - shades
thank you!! yes I always try to challenge myself to end a haiku with a new meaning/twist
it's incredible how much soul you can condense in shorter pieces, your last entry is very bittersweet. also in love with last week's prompt, came out really well!
@ryomakesthings Thank you!! Most of my poems start out longer and I cut them down in editing but this is also me being obsessive about making every word have a meaning
awwwh that's such a lovely little tribute. it's so hard when you know things are lost, but memories do live on :]
@tehuan thank you!!
the brief encounters one is soooo biting and punchy i'm obsessed... and the fav place one is so bittersweet :') and the one abt your aunt! it's so sad yet full of resonant love! you say so much in such few words, it's inspiring!