this is so beautiful and vulnerable, you put so well into words the aftermath of a kind of liminal grief. thank you for sharing!
love the sonnet structure and the story - they mesh really well together!
i like this work a lot!!! it's very different to my poem, but that's okay! i love seeing all the responses :)
love how evocative they all are - you really brought their individual worlds to life!
Posted my notes from underground bookbug thoughts. I've been sick for 2 weeks so trying to update things now