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I liked Morning Shower a lot. 'teeth stuck in meat/mouths stuck as smiles' reminds me of something similar I've written ('a smile is just another way to bare your teeth'), similar thinking perhaps. Grim physicality! Wilfred Owen liked it too, although in a different context.
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brennholz
2 years ago
Thanks! Honestly, I had to look up who Wilfred Owen was. (Don't know shit!) Seems like grim physicality was the only way for him to poetically process the horrors of war. Meanwhile, I'm just complaining about my dreams... Anyway, I really like that line, 'a smile is just another way to bare your teeth'. I think it could be the official slogan for passive aggression lol
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pikemalarkey
2 years ago
Ah, I think Owen is just a UK thing (also reading him now so he's at the front of my mind). German poetry is beyond me, so I really appreciate having your bilingual & English poems.
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saint-images
2 years ago
Once in a while I open your front page to look for that text adventure game you made the other day to listen to that one song; so it's actually 29 to 49 people. But then I remember that it's not on any page but in the commentes.
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brennholz
2 years ago
@saint-images https://brennholz.bandcamp.com/track/krasskater here's the song btw, without static and available to download :]
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https://brennholz.neocities.org/extra_bougie_beans_756_of_4213.png check out this funny bean image I found on the internet lol
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brennholz
2 years ago
new poem's literally just a .txt, it's 2 am and I couldn't be arsed with all this coding shit. This means it doesn't show up in the Update, so you get to figure out which one of these cruddy titles is new (hint; the one that's not in the preview image, probably). Night.
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brennholz
2 years ago
...back to apologize, that comment sounded kind of mean, just had a bad day lol
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had this story sitting all unfinished and terribly written on my laptop since december, opened up a new document and rewrote it without looking back on the original doc in one go. That's where the day went. I've got an exam I've barely studied for in two days and an Essay I haven't begun working on due in a week. it feels like I can only be productive in my hobbies if I'm supposed to be working on school shit. fuck