these are so awesome!!! really inspires me to make more zines and stuff :00 !!! - j
I think you encapsulated perfectly the idea of adulthood as compromise, there is something so beautiful about how you used such a small moment in daily life to communicate a strong concept!
I think the empty space to the right is really adding something to the piece. what a fun format, didn't know it was called that!
this is such a creative way to interpret the prompt! i liked your poem a lot !!! :D