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oooh!!! this prompt is really interesting :00

i'm so glad you like it !! :]

very much enjoy the prompt this week :3

yay, lovely !! i'll add you soon :] and the new prompt will be up soon !

actually, would you be able to tag your writing page as /muse? it's okay if it's /writings/muse if that's smth you want for organization, but i'm hoping to keep us all as cohesive as possible with our page names & all ! :]

i'll wait until you update it to put ur button on the site just so i don't have to change it again n mess with it, so just lmk when it's set up ! :]

i got it updated to be muse!

well, writings/muse haha

i love how it says so much with just a handful of words! i love the contrast! incredible :]

this is awesome!!!

I love the kindness and growth shining through in this, really like the format too!

the language here is so beautiful and tender!

this is an incredible piece, it's so reverent and intense and full of emotion. you are an amazing writer

beautiful work, there is so much life and detail in your writing. thank you for sharing!

"love scares me when all i have known is asymmetry" hits way too close to home. what a creative definition!!

thank you!!! it's all true :')

this is such an impressive poem - love the contrast between the inner world of the piece and the mathematical language!

@ryo thank you so much!!! i love writing mathsy poetry :D

I think the empty space to the right is really adding something to the piece. what a fun format, didn't know it was called that!

this is such a creative way to interpret the prompt! i liked your poem a lot !!! :D

I actually think you used the prompt as a jumping-off point very well - you explored the idea of asymmetry as a discrepancy between previously and currently held notions beautifully. it's a strong piece, love the final line!

gosh this is so very beautiful!

oh this is amazing!!! i really enjoyed your exploration of the prompt actually, i think there is a certain asymmetry in growing up and filling the space that opens up to you.

these pieces really struck a chord - they feel like someone discovering their own mortality for the first time in practice, which is something both relevant and hard to capture. great job!