I’m in love with ‘Eurydice’! The knowledge about the myth certainly adds a lot more feeling to the poem, like a warning.The last line was beautiful.
It was a bit insane how I related to ‘Beauty’. My plush rabbit, who also sits on my bed, will also smile forever. Thanks for sharing it with us!
I love your poem, 'Mayashiro'. It was full of a story that it's difficult to construct, but comprehensible from an inside perpective? I'm probably not making sense, but it was very beautiful. My favorite lines were: Stand still, take the kill; Look alive, learn to die, unsatisfied; and this wow ;We're melting in frozen names, and half-hearted breaths Like moths being drawn flames, we will not forget I won't forget
An online diary is something slimy in my experience, or something fishlike. It writhes & moves without us realizing sometimes. I've found solace in taking down my guestbook & making my site harder to find.